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One afternoon my brother and I headed out for a walk out and around our neighborhood. My
brother and I see a hill, we decided to climb it and look around at everything, which wasn’t the
best idea because my brother “Gael” went rolling down the hill accidently, and his arm bent
and he screamed as if it was so painful, he refused to move, so I had him wait right there
where he was until I could call for HELP. Gael and I were about 1 mile from home, as I’m
searching for help Gael is getting impatient, I tell him everything will be okay. As I’m still
looking my mom finally finds us, she had no idea what to do because she came looking for us
on foot. Right before sun is starting to set, we get Gael up slowly and get him home. It was it
was 8 o’clock that evening and Gael was still complaining about his arm, so we rushed him to
the hospital my mom was very worried. We made it to the hospital they called us back pretty
fast , although the doctors couldn’t see what was the problem with his arm, so they decided to
keep him over the night so they could keep running x-ray